So for my transition sentence, I have something like this; "Even though the different stages of dishonesty are important to the theme and the plot, the title is a vital contrast to the entire play.”
One of my concrete details is the last sentence when Jack says “I’ve now realized for the first time in my life the vital Importance of Being Earnest.” then I will go on to talk about how that sums up the entire play by acting as a moral for it, proving the significance of the title.
The second one is how Miss Prism loses the baby. I am using this so I can talk about how is really is important to be honest and truthful because the baby could have died because Miss Prism wasn’t truthful.
And the last point I will hit in my paragraph is How Gwen and Cecily were fighting about who really is Ernest. If Jack and Algy were earnest in the first place, they could have avoided all of this and not have hurt the people they love.
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I think the concrete details ties really well into your paragraph that your gonna do, and the sentence sets your paragraph up for those concrete details, but i think you should kinda reword it a little.
ReplyDeletehey, i changed my mind, you can keep the transition sentence, im gonna change mine instead
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